Rough cut

 

  • Overall, what are your ideas for how the above aspects of the video can be improved? Reshooting? Better editing? Sound? Rewriting parts of the script? What are your next concrete steps?
Over all the film is good at the moment it has enough of everything and I don't think reshooting is optional because the film is good and has been revised many times. 

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